新托福写作进阶:能避就避的50例病句(2)

26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

  28. What's about nonsmokers?

  改进: What about nonsmokers?

  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

  31. I am not good at maths, but English.

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

  33.It is children who clear about their interests.

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  34. I agree the latter idea.

  改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

  38. No one knows all the things.

  改进: No one knows everything.

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  43. They will learn the bad habits.

  改进: They will develop bad habits.

  44. In this continued process, people make progress.

  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

  49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

  改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

  50. I felt alone.

  改进: I felt lonely.

美勤精英顾问